On early morning
I was outside running.
The sun was on, high and bright.
Tippy toe,
How great is outdoor –
Urban escape
For my mind and body to shape.
A little bit of wind breeze,
A little bit of shadow from the trees.
A little bit of purple flower.
A little bit of warm shower.
Plip, drop,
Drip, drop.
Tippy toe,
Sea grapes, I command you to grow!
I would like to stay,
In the splatter of rain.
Meantime, no more drops.
The tropical rain stops.
My clothes are wet.
My curls are flat,
One early morning,
Playing and celebrating
Life overall, my neighborhood
Without umbrella and hood.
No sadness, no misery, simply happy,
With a little bit of melancholy.
Ida Tomshinsky@2024
4 comments:
It conveys a sense of contentment and gratitude for life's simple pleasures and a sense of being present in the moment, enjoy every day a touch of sadness is inevitable. Just what I needed to see today. Keep em’ coming!
Wow, that's such a beautiful and vivid description of your early morning run! I could almost feel the warmth of the sun and the refreshing breeze as I read your words. It sounds like you had a magical experience, embracing the elements and finding joy in the little things like the purple flowers and the sound of raindrops. Sometimes, those moments of simple happiness and a touch of melancholy can make life feel even more meaningful. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with me, it brightened my day! 😊🌞
Wow! Your poem "One Early Morning" is absolutely beautiful. I could feel the joy and freedom in your words as you described your morning run. The imagery of the sun, sunglasses, wind breeze, and purple flowers painted such a vivid picture. And the way you captured the essence of the tropical rain and the mix of happiness and melancholy was truly captivating. Thank you for sharing your talent and creativity with me. Your words have truly brightened my day! 🌞🏃♀️🌺
This poem seems to capture the joy and freedom of being outdoors on a bright morning, and the simple pleasures of nature.
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