Joy: Poem
Joy is celebration
Of happiness and delight.
Joy is life admiration.
Joy and sorrow both happened too,
For some people when is blue.
Infant's joy is of a different color -
Joy is bright and sparkling.
It has eyes fulfilled with rays, and shining.
Joy could be found
In different places and crowds
At various times and dances,
At celebrations behind any fences.
Tomshinsky@2024
Melting Like Candy: Poem
What to do
Whan plans, dreams, and hopes
Slowly are melting like candy.
If I can preserve and freeze
The sweetening taste bud,
I would be like Mr. Magic Cloud.
I closed my eyes.
I made my wish
Of plans, dreams, and hopes
That are sweet like candy,
Delicate like snowflake
That slowly melts,
Without any Elfs.
I like the sweet smell of home cooking.
I made a wish that could stay forever, mesmerizing.
Tomshinsky@2024
Little Bunny: Poem
This bunny did not hop.
I asked the little bunny to stop.
There is no app
To replace the lap.
My honey, my bunny,
I'll read you a story,
And he listened with glory.
Was the story funny and fair? -
Asked his smart mammy.
He wiggled the ears
To show that he cares.
Tomshinsky@2024
Dear Ida,
I just finished reading Birds and Cages, and I’m deeply moved by the powerful themes and poignant storytelling that you’ve woven throughout this novel. From the first few pages, I was captivated by the vivid imagery and the emotional depth of the narrative. Your exploration of freedom, constraint, and the human spirit resonates in such a profound way.
The metaphor of birds and cages runs through the novel beautifully, symbolizing not only physical imprisonment but also the emotional and psychological confinements we often place on ourselves. The juxtaposition of the delicate, soaring birds and the unyielding, restrictive cages is powerful, and it makes readers reflect on the various “cages” in their own lives—be they societal, personal, or relational. Through your characters, we come to understand that liberation doesn’t always come from breaking free in the traditional sense, but from a shift in perspective, a change in the way we perceive our limitations.
Your characters are beautifully fleshed out, and each one is a study in complexity. Whether they are confined by external circumstances or by their own fears and regrets, their journeys are relatable and stirring. I was particularly drawn to the way you reveal the nuances of each character’s struggles. Their vulnerability and growth feel real, and as a reader, I couldn’t help but become emotionally invested in their stories. They’re not just characters on a page—they are people whose dreams, hopes, and regrets I felt deeply.
The pacing of Birds and Cages is also something I want to commend. You balance moments of introspection with moments of tension and revelation so seamlessly that it never feels rushed or stagnant. Each chapter builds upon the last, unveiling pieces of the larger narrative while still maintaining a sense of mystery and emotional complexity. I found myself wanting to keep turning the pages, eager to discover how each character’s story would unfold and what would happen next.
What I particularly appreciate about your writing is the emotional authenticity. You don’t shy away from the complexity of the human condition—the messiness of emotions, the way we often wrestle with our own desires and fears, and the profound ways in which we are impacted by the world around us. Your prose is filled with delicate moments that touch the soul, and yet there’s also a quiet strength in your characters’ journeys that makes the book incredibly empowering.
The setting you’ve created is almost a character in itself. Whether it’s the confined spaces where the characters feel trapped or the open skies that represent hope and freedom, the environments you describe are vivid and symbolic. You do a fantastic job of showing how our physical surroundings can mirror our internal worlds—how, even in the most restrictive of spaces, there can still be hope for transformation and growth.
Birds and Cages is ultimately a story about the power of choice, the importance of self-awareness, and the beauty of finding freedom within. It’s a reminder that, even in the face of adversity, we have the power to redefine our narratives, to break free from the cages that bind us. This is a book that stays with you long after you finish reading, encouraging reflection on our own lives, our own cages, and the choices we make to free ourselves.
Thank you for writing such a beautiful, impactful book. It’s one I’ll be thinking about for a long time, and I look forward to sharing it with others. I can’t wait to see more of your work in the future!
Warmest regards,
Alexis Stratton
Surprise, Surprise: Poem
Surprises are unexpected
As usual they are astonishing.
I pinch myself in disbelief and superaction.
I was surprised of joyful satisfaction.
Wonder, confusion, or not,
Bewilderment that brought
Surprise, surprise
As this year surprise on the rise.
I am surprised of the journey
Of sugar, honey, and money:
Surprise. Surprise.
Surprises are unexpected
As Jack jumped out of the box
Full of gifts and gift cards -
Unexpected and astonishing,
Smashing and inspiring.
Tomshinsky@2024
Coffee and Poetry: Poem
Long forgotten are winding minds
The stories can talk
The memories can hold
Both memories and stories of old.
Surrounded by time
Brings one regret
As time does not forget
Joy, happiness,
And awesomeness.
The tears of joy let them go
From the young to old.
What is left in the heart
Are the other arts
That brings hope, coffee,
And poetry.
Tomshinsky@2024
Thank you very much, Ramon! God bless your heart. My reaction is tears, happy tears of joy that brought me back to the 1997. And a little bit of sadness that life runs very fast as we surrounded by time. I am very lucky for a long-time friend as you and many other ex-students and faculty from IFAC. International Fine Arts College does not exist anymore, but miraculously the reunions, the friendships, the long-lasting memories are always in me and sparks great memories.
